2008年1月30日水曜日

Development

I thought when you write own blog you should keep deadline of home works. Because we got many home works from every class, and each of them were very hard to do easy. So you make plan to do them. Especially, when you write essay or mega essay please careful of deadline and words count.

Next you have to include some photos and links. This way made your blog good and easier to read. When you go out or travel somewhere take picture with your sell phone. So if you use sell phone's camera you could search topics easier.

Third step was checking teacher's blog. It was Writing studio blog. It has very important information or attention. If you forget to see this blog you could not do important home works and could not keep deadline. So you have to check before class was started every time and reflect to develop own blog.
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2008年1月9日水曜日

Portfolios

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
0
9
2
4
4
19
18/18*.2
.20
Blog posts 1
8
20
19
7
4
59
59/90*.2
.13
Words 28
267
2643
1926
1876
269
7009
7009/7500*.2
.19
TOTAL
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12
Kumamoto essay07.10.09
9
162
5
6
3
6

This is our group essay.
Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26
Favorite place07.10.26
5
309
1
2
2
2
This is my own essay. I can take link.
Movie
review
07.11.11
Movie essay07.11.07
7
504
3
1
1
3
I could take link and photo.
Community
life
07.11.25
comminity life07.11.14
5
503
1
1
2
3
I could write earlier.
TV in
Japan
07.12.09
TV essay 07.12.11
7
600
0
1
1
2
I could write long essay.
Learning w/
computers
07.12.21
Learning with computers07.12.24
17
714
0
1
1
2

I could write good essay.




















Totals---
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • I thought my best essay was Kumamoto essay.This was group essay. The reason why I selected it that it had many pictures than other essays. I thought including photos is very easy to read for other person and good looking. Then my group members were everyone could write long essay. So my group could write good mega essay. And I intimated about Kumamoto This topic was good for us.

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics.

07.12.11
28
It was good. But it was a little short.
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

Third Essay  ☆Toy Story☆

07.11.11
15
I enjoyed reading this essay.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

"Learning with Computers"

07.12.12
22
She is my friends. And her comment said her opinion.
2.4. Most comments on:

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

Learning with Computers

07.12.12
64
They were all good. All were into their opinions.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.12.19
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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38
It was good respond.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

I cook them

07.10.17
6
I was happy for her comment.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.10.19
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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12
It was a little short.





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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • Yes, I desplay recent comments in sidebar. Because there are many informarion in sidebar.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • I was glad I got some comments from friends. There are many friends links in my blog's sidedar. So I often looked their blogs and I wrote comments. Writing comment was good communication way. I felt that my blog was read for other people. It was glad.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
97
07.11.7
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
157
07.11.14
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)

60
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**

157

97

157

average 137


07.11.14

07.11.07

07.10.24





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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Amazon rally

07.10.13

57

0
2-02
Mysterious woman
07.10.13

76

0
2-03
The Lost Ship

07.10.13

82

0
2-04

Black mail

07.10.13

68

0
2-05

Lucky number

07.10.13

51

0
2-06

Taxi of terrer

07.10.19

54

0
2-07
Mistery of LONDON

07.10.19

62

0
2-08

Star Reporter

07.10.19

71

0
2-09

Give us the money

07.10.19

58

0
2-10

Police Tv

07.11.30

126

0
2-11

The wrong man

07.11.30
102
0
2-12

The missing coins

07.12.11
152
0
2-13

Girl on a Motorcycle

07.12.11
131
0
2-14

The Purse

07.12.11
131
0
2-15

the baby sitter

07.12.11
79
0
2-16

photo finish

08.01.08.05
87
0
2-17

Sally's phone

08.01.05
88
0
2-18

Who's wants to be a star?

08.01.08
94
0










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TOTALS:
1569
0
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • I thought my best book review was about the missing coin. Because of it was lonf review. It is very difficult for me to write long book review. But it was very interesting story. It is my second reason. The interesting story made me good for easy to write review and explain about outline.Then I reached over 150 words.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?


5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): books, reviews, essays, movies, photos, quickposts, portfolios, links.
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
only links

  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)


5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • 3 other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • food&drink (23)
    • host family (1)
    • reviews (31)
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • 54 posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • 5 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • 0 posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: No media.

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. Work to my deadline for every homeworks. This is the most important thing.
  2. Searching a new topics every time. So own blog will be fun.
  3. Add to photos. So blog will be easy to read.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • Since I have written my own blog I could typing quickly. And I like reading English books. This oppotunity was very good.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • Please work to deadline of homeworks and keep writing every day. If you store the assignment you would hard to finish them. And don't afraid of reading English books. In the library there are many easy books. At first you read easy one gradually you try to read a little difficult one.

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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2008年1月8日火曜日

BookReview-2-18 Who's wants to be a star?


This book's main person was a girl. But she is not a girl. She is a lock singer and a famouce star. she is very busy everyday, ans her mother is addected on work of a girl. But in fact a girl thought very tired for her working. She wanted to a just girl. So she decided to go to a country and meet old woman. Old woman was very kindly and a girl could refresh. A old woman did not know a star. But in the town many people confusion for star going.[94]

2008年1月5日土曜日

BookReview-2-17 SALLY'S PHONE


This book's main person was Sally. She worked at office. But she thought that she want to work more and her friends was so busy. She want to be like her. And Sally had a boyfriend. He was not good man. Because of he is selfish, so Sally thought that she want to independent from him. One day she changed her sellphone with a man. So she could not talk with her boyfriend. she has a promise with him. She planed to meet and return to own sellphone. [88]

BookReview-2-16 photo finish


It is very mysterious story. One day a lady wanted to take a photo of herself. The photo booth was in the main station, but there was very crowd. So her friend recommended local photo booth. But first lady did not want to go there. Because of that photo booth has no people. It is uncomfortable. But she has no time to go different place, so she decided to go there. And she got a photo of different person, not her. Then she was faced affraid event. [87]

2007年12月24日月曜日

Computer leaning


Learning with Computers
Introduction
In this grade I tried to make my own blog for the first time. I have ever looked other people’s personal blog on the web. So I was exited when I was said that study style. But it was not only funny thing; we have to learn a lot of home work. Those were home works. Let’s review them!
Before Writing III
Before I study writing III, I could not use computer very much. Because I face it only computer class and when the time I have to use it.
During Writing III&IV
Writing III
During writing III, I seek how to make my own blog. We have to do something to present. And I enjoyed lay outing of my blog and going to look my friend’s blog.
Writing IV
During writing IV, I attempted to higher level blog not only cute or funny one. We have to present home works every week. So I hardly up date of my life.
After Writing III&IV
After writing III & IV, I hope I can be a good typing person. I want to write Japanese my blog someday.
Typing
Essays
We have a lot of time to up date of essays. For the first time I write essay, I was worried about words count. Most of essays have to write about 400 to 500 words. Then I thought it is difficult more and more.
Book reviews
Book reviews are very difficult for me. I have a little opportunity to read English books when I was high school student. In addition to I have to write reviews for those books. It was very difficult but I could find very interesting English book. It was good times.
Quick posts
I up date as quick posts a lot of times. When I write typing speed trial I could up date. And I always finding topic of my quick posts.
Comments
I was glad to got comments from my classmates. So I try to look others blog and comments for them. I like change letter or e-mail. So I thought changing comments is similar to it.
Portfolios
Portfolios is summarize of our grade. This subject is very difficult and I have to a lot of to do.
Reading
Book reviews
I have a little time to read English books. But I could meet good books. I thought that all English books were difficult and not friendly. But in that kinds of English book, there were comic type or like a drawing books. I worry that these books are easy for university students. So I want to read higher level books.
Writing studio blog
When I read writing studio blog, it was very very difficult for me. Because of there are much words and long sentence. But in that blos have a lot of very important things. So I have to read more carefully.
Listening
Talk with teacher
I like writing teacher. He is funny and kindly. When I talk to teacher, I was tense. But I tried to listen carefully what he said, so I enjoyed talking with him.
Viewing
Using photos
In my blog there were a lot of pictures. I like taking picture with sell phone and I thought that the way to use photos is good for find topics. Most of my topics are material of pictures.
Adding links
I add some links to my link bar. For example when I went to go dinner with my friends I add that restaurant’s link. I learned how to link in this class. It is good item.
Others blogs
I like looking other friends’ blods. And I tried to comments every times. Some time I appeared others’ blog. By using blog we could change my life topic. This is very exciting.

Conclusion
I thought I could experience good things. I wrote former, I made my own blog for the first time. If I didn’t have like this opportunity I could not make my blog and my typing skill is not development like this. And I met funny English books. I want to continue to writing blog and I hope I will make Japanese my blog some day. This opportunity is not only Writing class but also listening, reading and typing class.

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2007年12月12日水曜日

Learning with Computers

I think learning computer is the most important thing in these days. When I gave homework from school most of them are using computer. So we geve oppotunity to learning computer since I was junior high school student. In these days computer are developing very quickly with high technology. I guess the super computers more clever than human brain someday. And the oppocunity of using them increase much more. [69]

2007年12月11日火曜日

TV essay


Introduction
In these days we are facing at TV every time. It is good amusement item. This history was very long. In nineteen’s the Olympic was held in Tokyo. In this year TV were very increased to watch that in own house. TV was much expensive thing for people who were in nineteen’s. So they didn’t have own one in their house. Then they went to one house to watch TV. In first TV was not cleanly and big bottom to change TV channel. But it has been clearer and compacter more and more. Then it has also remote control. It is developing now.
By the way I want to write about TV’s part with their place.
Body
At house
The first place is at house. In these days the most of people have one TV as one house or some of them two or three TVs in one house. Besides one room has one TV. The part of TV in house is amusement for family. For example we will eat supper at living room, maybe a lot of family watch TV program. I think the panel game show will good communication item. Among own family try to answer that quiz together. So I think their conversation will be increase.
At school
The second place is at school. It case is very popular to use TV for study. In these days there are schools to use DVD or video. When I was elementary school student there were one TV as one class and other special class. We watched video or TV program many times. In junior high school using way was changed. We watched English video with TV. Because of that video was special one. So we can experience special time.
At hospital
The third place is in hospital. This item means not only in hospital also saloon or waiting room. When I had gone to driving school we could watch TV at front desk or at lounge. In these days we can look TV every where. The reason why that TV is increase I guess we can not spend free time usefully and we want to catch right news every where and every when. It case is good tendency. But I think we will be a person who can not speak with other people.
By cell phone
The fourth place is by cell phone. This way is very new one. In these days we have one cell phone as one person. And new call phone has function of watching TV by own cell phone. It is similar to former item. We tend to watch TV program and catch new news. If you want to watch TV by cell phone you would have to think of manner in public rule.
By car navigation
The last place is by car navigation. This way is also similar to former’s item. In these days we watch TV in the car by using car navigation. I often see the car which turns on a TV in the car. I think this is very dangerous. We have to concentrate on driving. The reason why I thought I am
beginner of driving. So I never turn on TV in the car.
Conclusion
I think watching TV is very good amusement and relax way. But I think also much watching is not good way. Because of if you always TV in all day and night long we can not talk with other people I feared. For one person talking and meeting with other rare person is the best way to amuse and relax.

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BookReview-2-15 the baby sitter


This is a new baby sitter story. One day a lady care her little sister and brother. But her middle brother was very noisy sound. Then a man came to her house. He said her brother's sound was very loundly. She apologized and explain detail. So a man helped caring her babys. After a week she came across the trafic acssidentn in street. So she called police and hospital. The victim was that baby sitter who is her neiberfood. [79]

BookReview-2-14 The PURSE


This main charactor is a young man. When he ride on a train, he found the purse on seat. He looked into that and search phone number. This purse's owner is a young girl. So he wanted to meet her anyway. Then he found her phone number and called. But he was very shy boy. So he couldn't talk with her very much. And she liked shopping, so she went to shopping after met him. He thought she was also shy. So he wanted to talk more again. He called her and he could met her again. Next time they meeing, he was surprised at her. Because of she talked very much by herself. She was very talkable. His image was broken and he didn't want to met her no more. [131]

BookReview-2-13 Girl on a Motorcycle


This main charactor is one man. One day he went to a motel on his way to travel by bus. His hobby is tour by bus. Then he saw a lady in front counter in the motel. He thought he has been seen her in past day. Was she a famous? And he found the news tv that a robber appered a supermarket. He thought the lady look like the robber. Because of her blond hair and riding a motorbike. Then next morning, he met her at restaurant of motel. Then he talked to her. while she was using phone a strange man looked her. The first man went to strange man, and talked about that news. But strange man didn't want to phone to police. Why did he stop calling? [131]

BookReview-2-12 The missing coins


This is a girl and boy's story. One day they walked in their town. There is good tour place and a lot of people come to sightseeing every weekend. Then a girl who is Carla looked a man in there street. He was playing flute and he wanted to drop coin into his hat. Carla thought his playing was very good. So she gave her coin for him. But a boy who is Pete didn't think good playing. Then they went to stamp and old coin store. There were one old man and a young girl in that store. Pete thought all stamps and coins were very interested him. But Carla thought that two store staff were didn't kindly. After they got out the store, the old man came to them and angry. He said very valuable coins were stolen by someone. Then he thought two student did. Who is the robber!? [152]

2007年11月30日金曜日

BookReview-2-11 THE WRONG MAN


This book is searching criminal story. One day a police man was said by his boss to catch the criminal of murder. Criminals were two people. They were in Sydney and sent the letter to police station. It had hint of criminal that "M is here." So a young police man went to Sydney travel tour because of the criminals were took part in this tour. In there he met a news repoter woman. She looked his secret note without saying. They were quarrel each other. But they cooperate and searching. They made an educated guess at 3 people and hound them. [102]

BookReview-2-10 POLICE TV


This book's main subject is security camera. It called in that police camera. One day the snach was happened in a city of London. So Dan and Sue who are the pollice officers of London went to catch the robber. But they could not get hint of the robber. Then Sue noticed police camera and if it noted something of hint we could get robber she thought. So they checked the film and found strange someone. They were twin pair and one woman had a baby. Other man has parka with hood. Then Sue was decoy and catched the lady and polices told her wether does she know the man or not. But she said she doesn't know the man. Resultly her and him were couple. [126]

2007年11月28日水曜日

sushi ♪♪


Yesterday, my mother and I went to go to dinner for sushi! These dishes were all we ate. I like shrimp and cuttlefish. And my mother ate fish bolied in broth. This is very big and delicious.[37]

beautiful part2


This is sunset in my town. I think the shadow of houses and a little the evening sun are very good effect to be beautiful.[25]

Beautiful



I went to Tenjin Fukuoka on the 23rd of November. The day I went there, illumination in Keiko park was turned on. These photo are one of them. All illimination were very beautiful.[33]

easy+ going: Book Review 2-8

easy+ going: Book Review 2-8

I think your book review is very long! I was surprised very much. I like Brad Pitt, too. He is very sexy and cool. I like his movie. I want to your post again.

2007年11月22日木曜日

Present




I cooked sandwich yesterday. There are three kinds of taste. Ham and cheese, egg and so on. I work in bakery for my part time job. So I could buy sandwich bread cheeper than other shop. And I added a little snack. It was made by edge of bread. I fry them in the pan with suger. So they were sweet and good taste! I want to charenge many cooking.[70]

2007年11月18日日曜日

So cute!


He is my friend's baby. He was born in August 21th, he has not been one years old yet. I gave a color pencil for suvenire in America. I wish he would enjoy drawing picture with it. [37]