2008年1月30日水曜日

Development

I thought when you write own blog you should keep deadline of home works. Because we got many home works from every class, and each of them were very hard to do easy. So you make plan to do them. Especially, when you write essay or mega essay please careful of deadline and words count.

Next you have to include some photos and links. This way made your blog good and easier to read. When you go out or travel somewhere take picture with your sell phone. So if you use sell phone's camera you could search topics easier.

Third step was checking teacher's blog. It was Writing studio blog. It has very important information or attention. If you forget to see this blog you could not do important home works and could not keep deadline. So you have to check before class was started every time and reflect to develop own blog.
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2008年1月9日水曜日

Portfolios

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
0
9
2
4
4
19
18/18*.2
.20
Blog posts 1
8
20
19
7
4
59
59/90*.2
.13
Words 28
267
2643
1926
1876
269
7009
7009/7500*.2
.19
TOTAL
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12
Kumamoto essay07.10.09
9
162
5
6
3
6

This is our group essay.
Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26
Favorite place07.10.26
5
309
1
2
2
2
This is my own essay. I can take link.
Movie
review
07.11.11
Movie essay07.11.07
7
504
3
1
1
3
I could take link and photo.
Community
life
07.11.25
comminity life07.11.14
5
503
1
1
2
3
I could write earlier.
TV in
Japan
07.12.09
TV essay 07.12.11
7
600
0
1
1
2
I could write long essay.
Learning w/
computers
07.12.21
Learning with computers07.12.24
17
714
0
1
1
2

I could write good essay.




















Totals---
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • I thought my best essay was Kumamoto essay.This was group essay. The reason why I selected it that it had many pictures than other essays. I thought including photos is very easy to read for other person and good looking. Then my group members were everyone could write long essay. So my group could write good mega essay. And I intimated about Kumamoto This topic was good for us.

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics.

07.12.11
28
It was good. But it was a little short.
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

Third Essay  ☆Toy Story☆

07.11.11
15
I enjoyed reading this essay.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

"Learning with Computers"

07.12.12
22
She is my friends. And her comment said her opinion.
2.4. Most comments on:

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

Learning with Computers

07.12.12
64
They were all good. All were into their opinions.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.12.19
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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38
It was good respond.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

I cook them

07.10.17
6
I was happy for her comment.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.10.19
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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12
It was a little short.





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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • Yes, I desplay recent comments in sidebar. Because there are many informarion in sidebar.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • I was glad I got some comments from friends. There are many friends links in my blog's sidedar. So I often looked their blogs and I wrote comments. Writing comment was good communication way. I felt that my blog was read for other people. It was glad.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
97
07.11.7
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
157
07.11.14
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)

60
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**

157

97

157

average 137


07.11.14

07.11.07

07.10.24





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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Amazon rally

07.10.13

57

0
2-02
Mysterious woman
07.10.13

76

0
2-03
The Lost Ship

07.10.13

82

0
2-04

Black mail

07.10.13

68

0
2-05

Lucky number

07.10.13

51

0
2-06

Taxi of terrer

07.10.19

54

0
2-07
Mistery of LONDON

07.10.19

62

0
2-08

Star Reporter

07.10.19

71

0
2-09

Give us the money

07.10.19

58

0
2-10

Police Tv

07.11.30

126

0
2-11

The wrong man

07.11.30
102
0
2-12

The missing coins

07.12.11
152
0
2-13

Girl on a Motorcycle

07.12.11
131
0
2-14

The Purse

07.12.11
131
0
2-15

the baby sitter

07.12.11
79
0
2-16

photo finish

08.01.08.05
87
0
2-17

Sally's phone

08.01.05
88
0
2-18

Who's wants to be a star?

08.01.08
94
0










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TOTALS:
1569
0
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • I thought my best book review was about the missing coin. Because of it was lonf review. It is very difficult for me to write long book review. But it was very interesting story. It is my second reason. The interesting story made me good for easy to write review and explain about outline.Then I reached over 150 words.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?


5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): books, reviews, essays, movies, photos, quickposts, portfolios, links.
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
only links

  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)


5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • 3 other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • food&drink (23)
    • host family (1)
    • reviews (31)
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • 54 posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • 5 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • 0 posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: No media.

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. Work to my deadline for every homeworks. This is the most important thing.
  2. Searching a new topics every time. So own blog will be fun.
  3. Add to photos. So blog will be easy to read.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • Since I have written my own blog I could typing quickly. And I like reading English books. This oppotunity was very good.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • Please work to deadline of homeworks and keep writing every day. If you store the assignment you would hard to finish them. And don't afraid of reading English books. In the library there are many easy books. At first you read easy one gradually you try to read a little difficult one.

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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2008年1月8日火曜日

BookReview-2-18 Who's wants to be a star?


This book's main person was a girl. But she is not a girl. She is a lock singer and a famouce star. she is very busy everyday, ans her mother is addected on work of a girl. But in fact a girl thought very tired for her working. She wanted to a just girl. So she decided to go to a country and meet old woman. Old woman was very kindly and a girl could refresh. A old woman did not know a star. But in the town many people confusion for star going.[94]

2008年1月5日土曜日

BookReview-2-17 SALLY'S PHONE


This book's main person was Sally. She worked at office. But she thought that she want to work more and her friends was so busy. She want to be like her. And Sally had a boyfriend. He was not good man. Because of he is selfish, so Sally thought that she want to independent from him. One day she changed her sellphone with a man. So she could not talk with her boyfriend. she has a promise with him. She planed to meet and return to own sellphone. [88]

BookReview-2-16 photo finish


It is very mysterious story. One day a lady wanted to take a photo of herself. The photo booth was in the main station, but there was very crowd. So her friend recommended local photo booth. But first lady did not want to go there. Because of that photo booth has no people. It is uncomfortable. But she has no time to go different place, so she decided to go there. And she got a photo of different person, not her. Then she was faced affraid event. [87]